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It would be my greatest honor if Professor A or Professor B could be my research supervisor.

I have reviewed studies written by both professors and believe that my interests in finding the effectiveness of online second language learning most align with Professor A research thrusts on language learning through new media and language learning through viewing video are most similar with my research interest, and Professor B research interests on Second language acquisition, Second and foreign language teaching.

My major in graduate school was Childhood education, and my previous research was nonrelated to linguistic. The research I did for master’s was finding moral education in relation to low crime rate in Japan. Research was a qualitative research, APA style. Even though my previous research top is irrelated to my current research interest but my over than 10 years accumulated teaching Japanese language as second language in both face-to-face classroom and online has well prepared me to conduct my new research interest on effectiveness of online language learning. Along with my enthusiasm and resourcefulness, would enable me to make a significant and valuable contribution on my research interest.