Edit essay help | English homework help

Editing an essay.
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requirement:
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For the peer reviews, make sure to be as specific as possible. If you tell your partner, “You have some grammar errors,” it’s not all that helpful. Instead, point out a specific error, especially one you see often. Give them a specific sentence that they should look at, maybe read out loud, and, of course, revise. For this peer review, I will hold people accountable for their level of specificity with their comments.
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Also i will upload the example, please do it looks like that.ÿ