Rewrite my thesis introduction on ”A scoping review on the application of technology in the treatment of hallucinations in schizophrenia.

Rewriting my thesis introduction on ”A scoping review on the application of technology in the treatment of
hallucinations in schizophrenia”. I am attaching the paper with the tracked changes. The tracked should be left
on if possible for the university to see my changes.
I only need the introduction to be rewritten as that is where my greenlight version failed the first time. The
comments of the professors can also be seen there for the introduction. Two such comments are for example that
it is hard to see a red line in my introduction and that they are missing a concise problem statement in the
beginning of my introduction.
The full reference list which also includes the introduction references is also included in the end.
The abstract and everything else starting from the ”current study” bold title can be ignored as I only pay for the
introduction as that is all that is financially possible for me.