What steps were crucial in the identification of the bacteria?
- Presentation and Structure
Introduction / Materials and Methods / Results / Discussion format used
A clear aim is indicated
Changes or modifications to the method (if they occur)
The test results for the samples are presented accurately and clearly
Identification using the key was indicated and explained
Well-structured, with logical flow
Appropriate use of headings
Suitable use of font style and sizes
Tables are formatted appropriately incl. labelling and layout
2. Discussion
The meaning of the specific results is explained
The accuracy and repeatability of the test results critically evaluated
The pathogenicity of the sample species indicated
The significance of the identified species for the scenario indicated
Practical measures recommended that relate to the identified species
Sources of error are identified
Effects of error on the results explained
Strategies to reduce error discussed
The methodology was critically evaluated / limitations explained
Accurate information presented
Precise information presented
Relevant information presented
- Writing Style
Clear, concise and coherent
Objective language used
Correct spelling, grammar, punctuation and word use
Each paragraph focuses on a single point
Statements supported with appropriate references
4. Research and Referencing
Peer-reviewed material sourced
Primary source material sourced
Non-peer reviewed material used critically and sparingly
Up-to-date sources
Relevant sources used
Broad coverage of authors/sources – not just given references
Sources not simply copied; no quotes used
Correct use of citation style
Reference list formatted correctly
All four sections are worth 25%
The Prac Report is a scientific paper: it will have the following format:
Introduction: very brief, but include an aim (not the “educational” aim given – give one that you think most precisely addresses what was achieved)
Materials and Methods: you probably only need to just reference to the online Lab (Cakebread 2020) – check out how to reference websites.
Results: present only results – the main result is a couple of names. If you have a table, think about what you present in it. In general, you shouldn’t include data that is not directly required for explaining your results or brought up in the Discussion
Discussion: this is the section that will require your greatest focus.
A separate Conclusion is not required, but you should have at least a simple statement to indicate that you do / do not believe your aim has been achieved.
In the report you need to address two main questions:
How valid are your results what are the sources of error?
You need to analyse the procedures undertaken. The following questions may assist:
What factors could have led us undertaking the procedures with a bacteria other than the one you did?
What factors could have led to not culturing bacteria from the original sample?
What steps were crucial in the identification of the bacteria?
What factors could have altered the results you obtained?
What is the significance the significance of this finding? You need to discuss the implications of finding this species in the milk and suggest the likely specific management actions that should be taken. As part of your report, you should explore the nature and spread of specific form of mastitis, the incidence within the herd and suggested measures for control of the bacterial species you have identified. This information needs to be supported by good strong references.
References and referencing
Basically, every substantial statement you make must either be your original creation or be referenced. Original should be indicated as such – it doesn’t happen that often!
But what is a good reference? In general, a peer-reviewed primary source journal article is to be preferred. All reputable journals have peer-review. Primary source means this has been written by the people who actually did the original research – the article generally has a Results section.
Can I use review articles? Yes, but sparingly and in the right context. Good for overview and general statements, but not for specific facts.
Can I use other sources (web-sites/ trade newspapers/ newspaper report etc) – yes, very sparingly and only when scientific journal articles do not present that specific information.
How many references should I include? Depends on what you are saying and the quality of the references. As a very rough guide – 5 is a minimum – 50 is probably overboard.
Style Guide: APA 7th Edition – https://library.unimelb.edu.au/recite/apa7
